tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-405597888190164628.post8675500418912748829..comments2023-10-31T02:18:34.259-07:00Comments on Stark Contrasts: Aged in lovedevanginihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17621118000772444679noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-405597888190164628.post-33013717911321630842011-08-15T22:39:15.162-07:002011-08-15T22:39:15.162-07:00@Syed Thank you very much for reading my poem with...@Syed Thank you very much for reading my poem with such a keen and observant attitude. I'm all respects :)devanginihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17621118000772444679noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-405597888190164628.post-15694659434340300482011-08-12T23:36:01.420-07:002011-08-12T23:36:01.420-07:00Relinquishing rhyme has done you good. This is a g...Relinquishing rhyme has done you good. This is a good one with some interesting similes:'locked like a bracelet/cheering on together/up and down the wrist of life'and 'melting, like ice floating in a glass full of youth'.<br /><br />'Delve into sins' and 'commit innocent crimes' are certainly good intentions, when formulated by persons basically good.<br /><br />Liked this poem a lot. Keep writiingSyed Ali Hamidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02121892535023529446noreply@blogger.com